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Jan 9, 2007, 8:19:54 PM
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Dreary Day revisited by Shirashima Dreary Day revisited by Shirashima
03/17/10

I was bored, and I thought it would be a cool idea to do this poem with this picture. They fit together well I think.
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007Balel Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Student Writer
A very beautiful poem accompanied by an amazing picture.

His final words really changes the whole situation of the way they parted....
At first you think he parted so that he would be free from responsability and other form of ties he had...
And in the end you realize that he only left cause it would be best for her. (That was only my idea though)

Well done :)
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Shirashima Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
^,^ I wasn't sure if that was very clear. Thank you for the kind words.
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007Balel Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Student Writer
np ;)
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shaboogamoo Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is a truly beautiful piece :)
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010   Writer
They do fit together very well.
And the poem is super as well - I love his parting words. One thing though, I don't think the font of those two words should be so big if he is whispering them.
Other than that, this makes me think of happier times, which is a nice way to start the morning.
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Shirashima Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I realized that, though the original point was that his whisper was more bold and telling than anything else in the entire poem, the most important part in a confusing little quip of someone else's life. It was a very early attempt at visual poetry, and I've not yet revisited it enough to actually make it how I imagine it. The typography isn't the best, and the size and placement just is a little off. My editing laptop died though, so I haven't added the software to the other computer yet.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010   Writer
It's cool.
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thetrueunknown Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Student General Artist
This is beautiful:)
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Shirashima Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for saying so. It is one of the first attempts I made at visual poetry, and honestly my favorite, as both the poem and the photo were mine.
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